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Villain v. Hero pt.1 šŸ¦¹šŸ¼ā€ā™‚ļø

Lately I've been working on Villain v. Hero scenes for a novel that I'm currently plotting out (HUGE shoutout to my amazing friend Adlai who has been helping SO much!!). I'll be posting a few scenes which I hope to include in the novel, and I hope you enjoy!

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"I need help," the hero said, breathing hard as they kneeled in the mud.

The villain crouched down before them. "Why is that?"

"Because there's someone worse out there I need to deal with. Contrary to what you might think, you aren't the worst person I've had to face. And I..." the hero trailed off, glancing away.

"And vou what?"

"I-i-i... The hero made a choking sound, and their shoulders slumped forward. Crying, the villain realized. The hero was crying. He leaned closer, taking a good look at their face. The cuts on the forehead and cheek seemed shallow enough, but now that he looked, the hero's eyes were a pale, cloudly color and seemed unfocused. The villain felt his blood run cold. "They blinded you?" He whispered. The hero nodded.

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They're short clips, but I can't wait until I can have all of them together in a novel!


~Shantel šŸ˜˜

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Guest
Aug 20, 2023

I love how the villain actually cares about the hero.

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Shantel Sirard
Shantel Sirard
Aug 21, 2023
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āš”ļø yeah, these characters are growing close to me šŸ„°

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adlaihecker
Aug 13, 2023

I love seeing this come to life :) This is going to be such a great novel, Shantel! So glad I could help out a little šŸ˜ Love this so much! (also this is Bad Guy 1 in the clips, correct?)


Adlai

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Shantel Sirard
Shantel Sirard
Aug 13, 2023
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haha, i know!! it's so exciting. I hope it turns out great! ADLAI, YOU HELPED OUT MORE THAN A LITTLE (you legit are my plotting buddy)!! (most of the time it's Bad Guy 1. do you think I should specify if it's #1 or #2?)

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Danika Biel
Danika Biel
Aug 12, 2023

AAAAAHHHH!!! IT'S SO GOOD!! I LOVE the chemistry between the hero and the villain. It makes me feel like the villain won't stay the hero's enemy for long. šŸ¤” (I already have a wild headcanon that the villain becomes enemies with the new villain, saying something along the lines of "THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE-") ((Forgive my horrible sense of humour))

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Shantel Sirard
Shantel Sirard
Aug 13, 2023
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haha, i feel like i posted this scene too early into the series šŸ˜‚


and yes, there are going to be two villains āš”ļøand there is something along the lines of "THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE-" haha, nah, great job!! i feel too obvious, lol

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