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Villain v. Hero pt.11 🦹🏼‍♂️

"I said that's enough now." The villain caught hold of the hero's wrists as they tried to keep fighting, tossing their weapon aside before drawing them close. Arms wrapping them in an embrace that may have been comforting if it didn't have the unyielding restraint of shackles.

"There we go, easy now. You've been hurt enough for one day."

Thrashing against the hold did nothing but exhaust the hero, and eventually, they sagged. They sank together to the ground in a tangle of limbs, rocking slightly. You hurt me; they wanted to scream. This is your fault.

"Shh," the villain murmured - warned, they didn't even know anymore. "It's enough. You've done more than enough; you've fought so bravely, but just listen to me. There's no shame in surrendering and living another day, alright?"

 

I guess y'all are my test readers since I'm giving you a ton of the scenes!! Be sure to tell me what you think in the comments below or by messaging me! Any help I can get is 💯 appreciated!!


~Shantel 😘

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Danika Biel
Danika Biel
22. Aug. 2023

I am SQUEALING, also, Villain, you better take good care of the Hero, or I will come after you myself (yes, I am threatening a fictional character). ❤️


Update: Just realized that this is Villain 2 and not 1 so now I'm on the verge of committing arson-

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Shantel Sirard
Shantel Sirard
22. Aug. 2023
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haha, you are so awesome Danika!! Villains 1 and 2 are both arsonists...

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