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Villain v. Hero pt.6 šŸ¦¹šŸ¼ā€ā™‚ļø

"I will never love you!" the hero grimaced, hissing through her teeth.

The villain chuckled. "Oh, you poor pathetic girl." His face turned serious. "You will learn to love me, and if you don't..." He smiled again.

A chill ran through the hero's spine as the villain tucked his fingers under her chin.

"You won't live to regret it."

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I'm wondering if this should be Bad Guy/ Villain #2, or else be Bad Guy/Villain #1. I'm leaning more toward Villain #2, but what do you guys think?


Thanks for reading!!


~Shantel šŸ˜˜


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Danika Biel
Danika Biel
Aug 14, 2023

I agree, this sounds much more like the second villain, considering the first is protective of the hero, and a whole lot nicer (in the usual, sassy villain way) about it too. (My bet's on the two villains eventually fighting for the hero)

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Shantel Sirard
Shantel Sirard
Aug 14, 2023
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you got it Danika! thanks for the comments. they're helping so much!! :)

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